emotional trauma, The Gates of Shiloh
The Gates of Shiloh – Chapter 4
A small tornado of leaves swirled toward a black wrought iron gate. Bending this way and that, like a drunken man searching for a tavern door, it passed through the metal framework of the gate and deposited the leaves in a mud-choked river. The gate had been fashioned years ago by a skilled craftsman. A dark-haired woman drew near. Timidly brushing aside a handful of spider webs, she peered through an opening in the gate. Frightened little girls ran to and fro being chased by dark spirits. A winged creature circled high above, its body barely visible against the dark, moving sky. It let out a dreadful screech.
The woman took a path to the right and walked along the foul-smelling stream. She approached a large building made of dusky purple, green, and blue stones. When she arrived at it, she went inside and pulled the groaning, weathered door shut behind her.
She stood in the middle of a parlor. A spiral staircase wound its way around the perimeter that had landings at all four of the upper floors. “Ladies, I need to speak to you!” She waited with her hands on her hips. A short, stout woman with red hair walked toward her from the kitchen. A tall woman with blonde hair and brilliant blue eyes came down the stairs. More women followed behind. They came from all directions. Before long, a dozen women of various ages had gathered around her. “Thank you for coming. We need your help. We’re at a mental hospital, and from what we can tell, we’re going to be there for at least three days. Roxanne is up right now, but we’ll need someone to take over who will cooperate with the staff and play nice until we’re released.” She looked at the tall blonde woman. “Jacquelyn, this is your specialty. Would you like to take over for a few days?”
“Why is it always me who has to get us out of trouble?”
The short redhead chimed in. “This is all Roxanne’s fault. If that stupid bitch would cool her jets and keep her fat mouth shut, we wouldn’t be in this—”
“Lucy,” the dark-haired woman interrupted, “I know how you feel, but what’s done is done. We can’t change it.”
“You’re one to talk, Lucy, you hypocrite,” said a tall woman with auburn hair and green eyes. “At least Roxanne isn’t sleeping with every truck driver who springs for a cup of coffee.”
“Screw you, Gina,” Lucy replied.
“I’ve had just about enough of your crap,” Gina replied moving closer.
“Stop it!” the dark-haired woman said, “I’m tired of your bickering. Right now, we need someone to go up who will cooperate with the psych facility staff. Unless you want to stay here indefinitely.”
“Fine. I’ll do it,” Jacquelyn said, walking toward the door. “When Roxanne gets back, would you tell her to do something about the darks? They’re terrorizing the littles again.”
“Thanks, Jacquelyn,” the dark-haired woman said, “I’ll tell Roxanne as soon as she gets back.”
~~~
Emilia continued typing her report. Roxanne stared at the computer screen. Her eyes closed. After a moment, they opened again. Their jade green color had become a brilliant blue.
This is an excerpt from my book, The Gates of Shiloh, which is available through Barnes & Noble or Amazon.
34 Comments
Carol Smith
Nice writing. I usually don’t like too much modern books, but the way you wrote in this book is very descriptive. Nice job! I will definitely check out the book.
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I enjoyed this book immensely. Not only was it a nice little escape mentally, but also was put together in such a way as to give a spiritual uplift as I read. I would encourage anyone that is thinking about purchasing the book to just make the leap and do it. You won’t regret it.
Thomas Coughlan
I tend to be a speed reader, but this deeply descriptive – and at times poetic – narrative made me slow down and soak in the rich imagery. Will head over to Amazon to check it out!
KimG
That looks like a fun book!
Now i feel as if i need to read the first three chapters, to put all of these characters into context..
Milton C Floyd
Where is Q?
Brian Kiegher Crossley
I see the link on Q was removed?
Wayne
Thank you Dave. What you have done for those of us who couldn’t do it on our own, cannot be measured in gold. Only in the spirit and in the kingdom can it be seen and measured. Countless people have graciously awakened to the reality of the enemy within and without due to your faithfulness in connecting us with Q’s message. May our savior keep you strong and immersed in his peace. Much love in Jesus’s name.
BTW…. Our beloved who is King of kings has got this!
Anonymous
Well said!
Rob
It is easy to disparage; it is hard to stay the course. I chose to listen to you, Dave, and to follow Q because I resonate with the message. As a young person in the 60’s and 70’s I began to perceive a “disturbance in the Force”, so to speak, and I believe I had a degree of awakening, back then. If there had been a Q, I would have followed, and if you had bees writing and speaking, I would have listened. The “BS” comment reminds me of the biblical Children of Israel in the time of Moses. As for me, I see the need to stand firm, believe, and “hold the line”. The alternative is unspeakable. You, Dave, are among the faithful. The writing of a novel sends a strong creative message of trust in God and is fully compatible with your Patriotic stand.
Deb McKnight
Dave, after reading this excerpt I had to find out more and so bought it on kindle and finished half already. Great story and spiritually uplifting as well!
Breck
Is the Shiloh book an allegory?
Praying Medic
Yes.
ecksone
I have little interest in a fictional work at this time. Instead, I would like to know where is Q? What or who is/was Q? I dislike being deceived. I feel Q owes us ( those of us that took him (sic) seriously) an explanation and an apology. What did President Trump know and when did he know it? I feel President Trump should have known about the “wide scale voter fraud network that we (Biden and company) have set up”. This was caught on video during a moment of clarity. Why were there no arrests? Are we to wait for even greater filth to be heaped upon us, the Seventy/plus Million that voted, trusted, and supported Trump? I am sorely disappointed in his lack of action. I thought and was waiting for him to declare Martial Law in mid-October. Why did he wait? Oh it is said he was letting things go through the legally defined steps…. yeah, and we can see how well that worked out. Bad optics? Look at the mess we are left with.
I doubt if our Republic can endure four years of unbridled socialist/communist rule like we are looking at with the enemy controlling the House, Senate, and Whitehouse.
And do not tell me that no action can be taken to clean up the mess until everything is reset. If a college professor is arrested, fine, one less traitor to deal with later. And if another corrupt professor takes his place, arrest him as well.
Come quickly, Lord Jesus, you are our only hope. The evil ones have done everything they could to separate us from you, Jesus, but you are the all powerful, all knowing Son of the Living Heavenly Father and you can and will be victorious in the end. Come quickly, Jesus.
doubleug
Agreed. PM is dodging the obvious questions and instead linking people to buy more of his books. Maybe that’s why he went with the Q psyop in the first place?
Brian Kiegher Crossley
ecsone,that last statement is the point. When we place our hope in God, then He can act.Till then we are we are just trusting in fallible man.I get your point on Q tho….we deserve better. Are the suicides part of the plan?
Ewa Salvaterra
I see what’s happening. Dave is speaking to
us in an indirect way- if you have ears to hear and eyes to see. Q communicated in a similar fashion, and I believe it was all legit. Some did get it, some are still working on it:)
Thanks to Q the whole world woke up. Isn’t that enough?
Think for yourself. It’s not a restaurant, where all information will be handed out to us on the platter. It’s a self- serve buffet at this point. Pick and choose – hopefully wisely. Most of Q info was strategic, not necessarily directed at us anyway. We need to be wiser by now and become more independent in thinking and acting. With newly attained knowledge, we need to speed our wings and start learning how to fly!
Thank you Dave.
Gemini
Loved this Book!!!!! Highly recommend!!
Keep your hearts and minds open Patriots…things are happening !!!
Keeping you and your lovely wife in prayer Dave hope all is well <3
Keeping PRESIDENT Trump and his team and the Military in my prayers also!!
God Bless America!!! <333
Anonmous
If Q was nothing more than a vehicle used to wake us up along w/the global community, then it was hugely successful!!! If other actions are likely to come in the future as we wait on God, then so be it. What I do find just a bit disingenuous; however is how so many folks began following you Dave & relying on your ‘decode’ messages. But now that Trump is gone & the ‘sheep’ have no ‘shepherd’ … you’re pretty much consumed w/your writing & even pushing your book on what always was a place for Q followers to go. Back in the day, when I grew up in NJ, they had a saying … “Hooray for me and the heck (cleaned it up) with you” and that’s kind of how it currently feels in these times of grave uncertainty.
Anonymous
That’s why I’d rather be a dog than a sheep, preferably a beagle. Even without an owner, the beagle pack together is strong.
Mindy Hale
Well, the goal post was most recently moved to March 4, I understand, when Trump is to return and be inaugurated under Nesara (one world government with cashless society/chip to buy and sell?)… The new “White House” is Mara Lago and Biden is not really signing real executive orders. “Enjoy the show?” “You are watching a movie?” Well, not seeing anything about Nesara coming out out yet and the time is fast approaching. Hanging on till about mid-March and if at that point, still no changes and Trump still not back on the radar, how can I not give up and assume like others have said that Q was a psyop to divide and conquer us… or that Q was part of Trump’s team to bring down the deepstate but they just had no idea that the corruption ran all the way down to the city level in politics. “Satan is the god of this world”. I don’t see anything like a MAGA movement or a Q-plan in scripture as God’s method to “fix” America. Still waiting, but not for a whole lot longer. We need information and real news but with all the bans on conservative voices we cannot even communicate with each other anymore.
Mark Urbo
Mindy – If they are signed and registered, they will show up here: https://www.federalregister.gov/presidential-documents/executive-orders/joe-biden/2021
Peter
Q did not impart any data that hasn’t been available for decades through various books and web sites. This cabal or deep state or Illuminati or whatever you would like to call them has been operating on this planet for a very long time. Their sordid behaviors and evil purposes are well known and documented. At this time the apparency is that evil has triumphed. Personally I don’t think that’s the case. The war being waged across physical and spiritual planes is intense and beyond my ken. We all need to take responsibility for what is happening and do whatever we can. I appreciate Praying Medic relaying Q’s information to me and to everyone else. Many people were awakened due to Praying Medic’s work. Thanks Dave.
Betty
This chapter didn’t make me want to read more,
Gemini
You have no idea what your missing Betty !!! It’s excellent!!
toniacgb
The book is excellent! I read it when it first came out and bought copies of it to give away. Reading the excerpt made me want to read it all over again, which for me is rare as I only read a tiny few books more than once.
Mary Shoemaker
I thought the excerpt was kind of creepy, but I would like to read more! I love to get into other worlds and escape. The “Narnia Chronicles” are my all time favorites. They too are Allegories. Aslan, the Lion, was all powerful (Jesus Christ).. I felt bereft after the “Last Battle” even though it ended with the coming of The KINGDOM! That book reminds me of the times we are in RIGHT NOW!!! I’m almost afraid to read Dave’s book, because I think this one will be so similar!
Linda
Excellent writing! I will be getting our book. I bought the 2nd Q book and thought it was great. Even though Q hasn’t posted I learned a lot from your decodes. Ignore the haters and scoffers!
Mike White
The parable of Lazarus seems to really sum up the this moment in time. Dave, many of us remain steadfast in our faith. Unfortunately people were assuming that “it has to happen now”, insistent on instant self-gratification being the only path forward. We are only human and it is common to think we know better; but we must be open to what God’s plan “IS” and not what we want Gods plan to be. God Bless you Sir.
Amy B
Q is real. Give it time people, it takes time to deal with the level of evil that has been controlling the world at large. FOCUS! 🙂
Trust God!!!
We are at war!!!
Pray and keep your focus on the important things, like praying–standing in the gap for the souls that are on the front lines and for those that are being mistreated etc.
Hold the line.
J. Oke
The Great Awakening, caused by the Q drops and the thousands of passionate anons, has also created hundreds of thousands of Digital Solders, fighting to spread the real news, not the fake ones. “We are the news now” has already become a reality. That could never have happened without Q and the anons.
As a consequence, there have been created thousands of (free to watch) podcasts to wake people up to the Truth. This is all reality. Wakening up people (especially the young) is one of the most important things to do currently, and it has been done, it is being done, and will continue. The critical mass has already woken up, this is unstoppable!!
Karen from Missouri
Amen. I think the double-edged sword is while we wait for the changes to come, we are being changed.
Anonymous
>Biblical.
>Q
Perhaps the ‘Biblical’ reference was more New Testament than old, in the sense of Crusifixion & Resurrection rather than ‘Walls of Jerico’, hopefully we shall see the Pres’ second coming.
Pam Childress
Through the prophets of today, Hank Kunneman, Dutch Sheets, Kat Kerr, etc., I have no doubt that not only did God put Trump in office but He also has Trump’s back right now. What course of action could the Praying Medic have now except to counter the blatent misbelief, demands, anger and impatience of “plastic” Anons?
I agree it is better to release our faith to God now because regardless of whether there is a Q or not is irrelevant. Only when we are helpless and admit we are powerless does God show up to complete his plan. I lost sight of whose plan this is. It can only be heralded in by the Lord Almighty, to whom should indeed receive all the Glory for it. Faith and patience are the prerequisites for this war. If you find yourself lacking start reading The Praying Medic’s books on healing, traveling in the spirit, the Court’s of heaven….I am learning so much! I would rather have Dave Hayes holding a pen in his hand than holding my hand. I love you brother!